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Wednesday, 17 April 2013

week 3

-----------------------------     Week Three’s Work        body language, feelings

Write a passage in which a person’s feelings are expressed at least in part by body language.   Focus on a detail, a close-up,  possibly use comparisons.

·         “Who are you?”  
  She gulped slowly and  then answered. . . .

·     “And the capital of Iceland,  Thomas?”   Thomas put his hands to his head,      banged his elbows  on the top of his desk, and stared down very hard. 

·         She waved as if cleaning an imaginary window.

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